Explanation for partially reverting Special:Diff/256667
- "designed" sounds better than "made" in my opinion.
- You can also discuss the change on the article talk; it doesn't have to be on user talk.
- It should be "Immediately reverting" instead of "Reverting" because the editors might come to a conclusion in the end that the latest edit should be reverted.
- The rule does "generally" apply because there are exceptions.
- Keeping "Edits that have already been approved ..." instead of "Edits that have been approved ..." makes it clearer; "already" shows that the edits were approved before they were made
- Keeping the "own" in "Reverting your own actions (sometimes known as 'self-reverting')" sounds better in my opinion.
- The last exception applies for all edits in your own userspace; not just your own.
I kept some of the other changes that I thought improved the page, though. If you disagree with any of my statements above, feel free to reply. 
bigpuppy talk ▪︎ contribs 16:50, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
